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Scribbling Scrivener Reads: The Last of the Ageless by Traci Loudin

The Last of the Ageless by Traci Loudin is a post-apocalyptic novel set three hundred years in the future on after an event referred to the Catastrophe. The events which led to the Catastrophe and since then have altered not only the planet but also the human species. Some humans can age back and forth at will. Others can shift into different kinds of animals. There is also a species known as the Joeys who are part alien and part human. But don’t worry, there are still the plain, old boring humans but they are now known as Purebreds. The novel centers around two groups each consisting of unlikely trios as they try to accomplish different objectives yet who are ultimately forced to come together and defeat a common enemy.

There is not a clear main character, but rather three: Dalan, a teenage Changeling which means he can transform into different animals; Nyr, a different kind of Changeling whose main form is a feline-human hybrid; and Korreth, a Purebred slave, who along with his friend Jorrim, have recently escaped their master. In addition to these three, we also see the story for a fourth character, Caetl, who is a mystic, but his actions don’t factor in too much until about half way through the novel.

The novel starts with Dalan who is heading away from his village to complete an annual rite of passage journey. During this journey, he must go out into the world alone to be chosen by a dragonfly as a companion and return safely home. However, even before he leaves his village he is told that his journey will also see him having to solve a problem. Nothing specific is told to him as to what that problem is so when very early on into his rite of passage journey, he encounters Nyr, an uneasy alliance forms between the duo after Dalan saves her. At first he believes he has solved the problem but something inside of me nags at him that he is not finished. Later on the duo encounter a Joey, Ti’rros, who he saves from death much to the annoyance of Nyr and the disappointment of Ti’rros. Ti’rros believes throughout the book that her actions, which led to her nearly dying, are too shameful for her to continuing living in the world.

Dalan is a sympathetic character whom I liked quite a bit. He is a good, naïve kid who is a firm believer in the Ancient teachings. After finding his dragonfly and saving two people’s lives, all he wants to do is return home but circumstances work to take advantage and even exploit his non-violent nature and morals.

The reader is introduced to Nyr when she stumbled upon Dalan. She is part of the Tiger Clan and is usually in her half-feline, half-human form. Her personality and background are a complete opposite from Dalan as she is angry and violent. Where she comes from, violence is normal and one of her ambitions is to do a hostile takeover of her clan. It is her clan which pops into the story once in a while which propels most of her story but with disastrous results.

She doesn’t like or trust Dalan and Ti’rros yet due to some necklaces she’s stolen from someone, they are bound together. Unknowingly, what she thought were just trinkets, trophies to brag about committing a misdeed, are what lead to her downfall. She has some idea something isn’t quite right with the necklaces since they act as some kind of shield when someone attempts to harm the wearer. To spread the love, she gives Dalan and Ti’rros each one which inadvertently seals their fates together.

Finally we have the other major character of Korreth. He and his friend Jorrim are former slaves who have escaped from their master. When we first meet him, he is still physically bond to Jorrim, something they are so used to that they have mastered how to move as well as create their own language via a serious of taps. Both Korreth and Jorrim want to return to their respective tribes because they are not from the same one. As Purebreds, they are the lowest form in this version of Earth

They come across a powerful woman called Soledad, who is one of the Ageless. An Ageless is someone who has been around far longer than the average lifespan because they can easily switch from child to old person and everything in between. This makes it incredibly difficult, but not impossible, to kill an Ageless because when injured, all they have to do is simple melt into a different, un-injured age. Soledad removes Korreth and Jorrim’s physical bonds only to bind them to her via magic spells. Now controlled by Soledad, they once again find themselves at the whims of a master who commands them to inflict violence and protect her.

Nyr and Soledad control where each trio goes and at first, our unlikely trios are on separate paths. Nyr and Soledad have their own agendas and neither cares about the welfare of their followers other than to keep them alive as long as it suits them. Although neither woman’s original plans should have crossed, they do when it becomes apparent someone is killing off high-ranking Ageless. It’s not known originally why and this leads to rumors and speculations. Through a series of events involving different villages, the two groups must forge an even more unlikely alliance to defeat the enemy.

It is these unlikely, forced alliances which is one of the biggest themes in The Last of the Ageless. No one really trusts anyone else and with very solid reasons. Dalan disagrees with Nyr’s violent ways. It is only Ti’rros whom he gets along with and that is because Ti’rros is a quiet creature, wallowing in self-pity. Korreth and Jorrim are forced to align with Soledad whom they are constantly trying to figure out a way to break the spell which binds them to her. They can’t kill her because they’ve been ordered not and because if they do, it will kill them in the process. Soledad is a liar as is Nyr and while their underlings know this, they have to accept it if they wish to survive.

Oddly enough, each woman’s underlings develop an odd respect for them. I wouldn’t say it is a case of Stockholm syndrome as Dalan, Ti’rros, Korreth, and Jorrim all still acknowledge Nyr and Soledad are not good people. It is only in Nyr’s character that we see a change where she seems willing to voice admiration for Dalan’s morals. Soledad, though, doesn’t ever come out and say she respects or appreciates Korreth and Jorrim’s forced assistance.

Another theme that appealed to me is the cultural and philosophical differences in play in this world. It’s a very tribal-centered world with a definite pecking order although who is on top varies depending upon who speak to. The only thing that is certain is that Purebreds are the lowest form. Nothing’s unique or special about them after all.

Everyone is pretty ignorant of what each other’s tribes are like, something that is relevant now. The fact Ms. Loudin’s characters all struggle with it, even the Ageless ones who have been around since before the Catastrophe and have access to bits and pieces of advance technology, is intriguing. What is fascinating is throughout most of the book, none of the characters want to really care to change their ignorance until the last third or so of the novel. This is when it is realized that if they work together, they can defeat the now common enemy but seeing each of their strengths brought to the fight. Oddly enough it takes the enemy’s own motivation for what he’s doing which gets the two groups to realize this.

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Initially I was worried that with a story set in a post-apocalyptic world would be too depressing and bleak since so many novels take this approach. It was refreshing to have a world which still basically functioned even if the planet and creatures inhabiting it were drastically altered.

The world it’s set in with is a mixture of old and new, magic and technology, and was not something I expected. The characters were unique and their uneasy relationships didn’t feel forced even though the circumstances each group operated in were. The changes in the characters also felt natural and I liked how some of the characters didn’t necessarily change for the better. After all, we don’t all get better with time and age. Even the main villain and the other possible villains had motivations which were not what they seemed at first.

I think Ms. Loudin thoroughly knows this world and these characters and a lot of time and consideration was put into it. It’s hard to juggle that many different characters but she did it very well.

The biggest drawback to me was the last third of the book. There was a lot of action and the final battle went on forever because of the way Ms. Loudin structured it. Since we’ve got more than one main character, each one told the final battle from their point of view. This made it difficult for me to grasp at first until I realized what the author was doing. Initially I thought that was a unique approach until it kept going on and on.

Another drawback, although minor, was how many characters had more than one name. Depending upon whose head the reader was in, at times it was hard to keep track who was actually being talked about. With a novel with several characters, having multiple names gives the illusion there are even more characters involved in the story.

Another minor problem I had with The Last of the Ageless was how often people were traveling from point A to point B then back to point A. I admit zoning out a little bit when people were yet again on horseback and journeying. Reminded me a little bit of The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings trilogy with all the walking.

So on a scale of 1 to 5 pencils, I give The Last of the Ageless three and three-quarters pencils. It wasn’t what I was expecting and I thought the characters were wonderful.

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Scribbling Scrivener Reads: The Gem of Acitus and Reefer Snakes! by Jay Requard

No, that’s not the title of one book, but two novellas written by Jay Requard. Because they are short, I read both this month and will review each.

First up is The Gem of Acitus which follows Manwe, a master thief better known as “The Panther”, after he steals the famed Gem of Acitus. He gives it to his lover and business partner so he can fence the jewel. Unfortunately, Manwe’s lover quickly disappears and Manwe is falsely accused of raping the daughter of the powerful man whom he had stolen the gem from

What I appreciate about the story is it doesn’t focus on Manwe clearing his name rather it focuses on Manwe trying to find his lover in order to re-steal the stone. This is where the real story is and in a short amount of time, approximately 26 Kindle pages, the reader gets a lot of emotion and character development.

Mr. Requard does an excellent job quickly getting the reader immersed into the story’s world and the character of Manwe. Manwe is very likeable. Yes, he’s a thief but he does it for honorable reasons, he doesn’t pocket a lot of the money what he steals brings instead giving it to a rebel cause. He is selfless and cares more deeply about his lover than the gem.

This was one of those stories I felt at the same time the appropriate length yet I wanted to see more of the world. On a scale of 1 to 5 pencils, I give The Gem of Acitus three-and-three quarter pencils.

Next I read Reefer Snakes! and it is very different from The Gem of Acitus. Where The Gem of Acitus has a love story at the core of it, Reefer Snakes! is essentially a stoner comedy set in a fictional Iron Age world. Jishnu is the main character and member of a mercenary group called the Grinders Sellsword Company. A bureaucrat approaches the Grinders to protect the cannabis fields overseen by a shaman named Spliff and a naga (man-snake) named King Patta.

I’ll just let that description sink in for a minute.

However, all is not what it seems. Despite the constant haze, the Grinders Sellsword Company is still able to get the job done demonstrating what amazing warriors they are. It is during the final showdown the reader learns the true intent was in sending the Grinders to the cannabis fields.

Reefer Snakes! is funny and very odd. Its world is gritty, like The Gem of Acitus, but unlike that world, this one is even more brutal. While I liked this story and it made me laugh several time, it is what it is. It’s meant to be humorous and bizarre but nothing more than that. It doesn’t have the emotional pull of the other novella, which is fine.

If you want something fun to read, that won’t tax your brain, then Reefer Snakes! is for you. On a scale of 1 to 5 pencils, I give it two-and-three quarter pencils.

 

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Scribbling Scrivener Reads: The Gospels of Cal’eia – The Book of Dean by Calandra Usher

The Book of Dean is the first book in The Gospels of Cal’eia tetralogy by Calandra Usher. Like the book I reviewed last month, this is also a debut novel although it came out last year. The story centers around Sarah who is on the run from something or someone. She stumbles upon a very odd property in the middle of rural North Carolina which starts her off on a very odd journey. Something is obviously very, very different about Sarah as she can speak and understand horses. One of the four men who live on the property discovers Sarah. When she is about to leave the next morning, an accident forces her to stay until she recovers. Her recovery allows her to and the men to cautiously get to know each other with each side quickly determining none of them are quite human.

The four men, Dean, Fabien, Warren, and Pete, are all very different from each other. Dean is the leader of the group, Fabien is the gourmet cook and joker, Warren is the big teddy bear, and Pete is the serious intellectual. For the most part they accept Sarah right away although they are cagey about seeking medical attention for her after a terrifying accident badly damages her leg. Sarah is okay with this despite the fact she has a difficult time trusting people. She justifies it because she sees auras around people and theirs apparently project they are okay. Sarah also has some other otherworldly capabilities like telepathy, assigning shapes to foods she eats, and has a deep spiritual connection with the world.

The men are able to quickly earn her trust although Pete is the most wary of the four as he realizes something is very different about Sarah and worries about the group being discovered. It bugs him that she was able to find their very large and oddly designed estate in the first place as they intentionally built it in the middle of nowhere. As the leader, Dean trusts Sarah and advises the other men to do the same. Slowly Sarah opens up about herself and questions the men before finally grasping who and what they are. It’s not until the end of the book that who and what Sarah truly is, is revealed thus setting up the next book and presumably is the rest of the series.

Despite this being subtitled The Book of Dean, we really don’t get to know Dean very well. He’s a nice guy, apparently is gorgeous because Sarah keeps telling the reader, and is smart and well-read but then again all of the men hold multiple PhDs in various fields. But that’s it other than an obvious attraction between Sarah and Dean. Despite all this, I didn’t find Dean all that interesting. Out of the group of four men, I found Fabian and Ren the most interesting for very different reasons. Dean was just too perfect and even when there’s a hint of a dark side, something we all have, it’s dropped until the very end when the men’s true identities are clarified.

I also didn’t like Sarah very much. Despite her age being stated as twenty-eight, she comes across as much younger. She’s a caring free-spirit and has this mystical air surrounding her but I found it grating at times to read her ADD-like narrative. Since my spouse has ADD it’s taxing enough having conversations with him that when I read a book I don’t want my lead to narrate that way. Sarah’s story isn’t helped by the first two chapters which are strictly backstory and could have been used later in the story when as it became relevant to the story. There were other chapters that, while had lovely writing and emotion, were distracting from the story itself.

There are little things which are never explained or resolved. For example, the reader is never given the reason when Sarah is still on the run. She initially leaves home around the time she graduates from high school because her mother has passed away but since the book begins when she is twenty-eight, who or what is she still running from? I wonder if this is something that is explained in the next book but more hints or at least letting the reader know, not necessarily the other characters, what is after her. Also, Sarah destroys a valuable object which surprises her and the four men yet again this isn’t explained.

I also felt like there wasn’t any real tension or sense of foreboding throughout the book. I don’t necessarily need a story to be dark and brooding but the whole book and the characters are just too nicey-nicey for me. Even when there are some darker spots, they’re microscopic. The ending, though, I think does hint that perhaps the story will get maybe a tick darker.

Overall, the book didn’t work for me. I wasn’t particular taken with the character of Sarah and felt the mystery surrounding the situation could have been resolved more quickly. I think there was way too much back story that added very little and I think dragged the pacing of the story down. There were also way too many grammatical errors I couldn’t just pass off as a product of how the main character speaks.

I did like some of the otherworldly descriptions and I think Ms. Usher captured the colors and shapes of emotions quite well. I also liked the interaction with the horses and cat because I’m an animal lover and talk to animals. Certainly not in the same way as Sarah, of course, but I appreciate that animals have thoughts, feelings, and unique personalities just like people. Ms. Usher also paints quite a lovely picture and I appreciated reading something different within the fantasy realm.

On a scale of 1 to 5 pencils, I give The Gospels of Cal’eia – The Book of Dean two-and-a-half pencils.