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Weekly Musing: Reference This

In the past I’ve talked about a variety of resources I found helpful at the time. Re-reading it I realized how much my idea of what is useful has changed. Some of the tools I listed I no longer use. Either outgrew them or decided to try others.

One of the biggest changes has been in the kinds of books I consider to be valuable reference materials. I’ve expanded my scope beyond grammar and editing books to books on such topics as superstitions, what various traumas to the body actually look like, to how to better write emotions. No matter what genre you write, be it general fiction, mystery, fantasy, historical fiction, etc. below I’ve listed a few books I think every write should have on the bookshelf.

Story Elements and Novel Writing – Writer’s Digest produces several books on story elements.  These are great for strengthening your strengths and providing help on weaker areas. For example, I think my biggest strength is dialogue yet I still have a book on it. I also have a book on characters, emotions, and viewpoint. Never know when characters might start sounding alike or when I struggle to find the right “voice” for a character.

What I personally focus on is having multiple books on my weak areas. For me I believe that it is setting and descriptions as well as plot and structure. I struggle to translate the world and people I see in my head onto paper. Also, since I consider myself more character-driven, making sure the plot makes sense and has scenes that support it I struggle with.

I think every writer should have at least one book on beginnings, middles, and endings since very few writers, if any, are proficient in all three. I think it’s also great to have a book on these since I see so much emphasis placed on the first sentence, opening chapter, or first 50 pages that it’s no wonder books fall apart in the middle and sputter to an end. If we want our readers to keep coming back we need to look at our manuscripts as a whole.

And like any writer, I have a few books on how to write a novel. There’s an overwhelming amount of books out there. Some claim you can write a draft of one in as little as a month, others set more realistic goals (unless you’re slow like me) of 90 days. Still others focus on how to write the kind of novel that will get people’s attention. I decided to go with a couple because too much information can be a bad thing.

Emotions and Personality Types – I was naturally born with a gift/curse to empathize with both real and fictional people. In my head and heart their emotions tend to be felt as much as if they were my own. Yet I frequently struggle to set those emotions on paper. This makes me feel as if I’m not doing the characters justice.

I heard about a book called The Emotion Thesaurus via an article. What I really appreciate about this book and the subsequent follow-ups The Negative Emotion Thesaurus and The Positive Emotion Thesaurus is that they aim to help writers get out of the rut of describing the same emotions in the same way. In the original book the authors include physical signs, what a particular emotion feels like internally, and mental responses to name a few of the categories. In the two follow up books they take things further. They include associated thoughts, behaviors and attitudes, related secondary emotions, positive and negative aspects, and even examples from TV and film.

Another book I’ve found useful is the Writer’s Guide to Character Traits. Unlike the emotion thesaurus series, this books provides deeper analysis. In addition to listing various personality types, the author offers how personality differs in children and adolescent. Other features which appeal to me are discussions on psychological disorders, criminal types, creating a family, and love, marriage and other kinds of relationships.

The Human Body – I’m not necessarily referring to having Grey’s Anatomy nearby, but I do think it is important to have books dealing with the human body. For example, I have a book on poisons, body trauma, and more than a few books on weapons. Although not quite related, I even have a book on survival. Never know when a character will wind up on their own in the woods or desert or ocean.

If you think only crime and mystery writers need these kinds of books, think about this way. Say you write historical fiction and have a scene involving a battle. The time period dictates the weapons and equipment involved, but you’ll want to make sure injuries and deaths inflicted are plausible.

Or if you write fantasy, perhaps the book on poisons can be of use. Maybe your protagonist likes to coat a particular kind his or her weapon of choice. What would using poison plus their weapon of choice due to a body? Again, having a book on body trauma can be helpful for describing the wound.

Myths, Symbols, Superstitions, and Legends – Again, no matter what genre you write in, why not consider adding a few of these books? While I’ve yet to use my books on superstitions, symbols and signs, and mythology, I feel they are valuable. Who knows, maybe I could have a character obsessed with Nordic mythology who uses it guide his or her life.

Think only fantasy or horror writers would benefit from these? Think of it like this. Say you write mystery. Perhaps the bad person leaves behind a series of symbols. Maybe instead of using the most recognizable symbols in your country, you cast your net wider and look to another part of the world. What does this say about the antagonist? Is he or she from that area? A person obsessed with the culture? How do you go about narrowing your field of suspects? Maybe your cast includes an archeologist who has worked in that region, an anthropologist specializing in that culture, and a native of that region. Maybe the real culprit is none of them and is someone who wants to frame one of those people for an unrelated personal reason.

 

Having a variety of reference books beyond the usual writerly ones is a great way to get inspired. If you’re stuck in your story, consider perusing through a book of superstitions. Or when you’re editing and want a better way to describe a character being sad. Grab your books on emotions. Not only does it add more realism, it can make our work more interesting and unique. And you don’t need a ton of books to help you. All the books I listed are condensed and brief, general information. Many of these are geared toward writers and are easy to understand. Their just jumping off points and can be used in conjunction with websites and other books.

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Weekly Musing: Enough About Me, Let’s Talk About You. Or Not.

Something I have always found difficult to come up with is my author’s bio. I don’t like talking about myself in general and whenever asked to tell someone a little bit about myself, my introversion really kicks in.

When I first started submitting my work, one of the things I hadn’t anticipated was being asked for an author’s bio to accompany my story. After all, what the hell has that got to do with the quality of my story? It doesn’t, and an overwhelming majority of places I’ve submitted to state that it doesn’t affect whether or not they accept a piece. Mainly it’s there for them to print in case your story is selected.

While reassuring to a degree, I quickly had to look up what to include in an author’s bio. Are there industry accepted requirements? And what are those requirements? I probably spent a solid day researching the topic and determined two things: word limit and content. However, there is no simple answer as to the correct formula. Check out any About the Author blurb in a book and you’ll see even at a professional level, it varies.

Word limit This is probably the biggest factor because it determines content. I’ve noticed many places ask for a biography of 50 words or less. Some even want only a sentence or two.

Depending on where you’re at in your career, this can be a great length or problematic. At first I found this sorta easy as I had nothing published, but that did mean I had to talk about myself more. Below is an example of the bio I submitted for the first piece that came out:

DH Hanni lives in Eastern Washington state and enjoys writing historical fiction. When not lost in her own world, she enjoys spending time with her four-legged family and spouse.

As you can see I stated what I enjoyed writing, scant personal details, and where I lived. Admittedly it’s not great and for the life of me I don’t understand why I capitalized Eastern. Yet those two simple, crappy sentences took me a while.

What helped improve my author’s blurb was further examination of other blurbs. When the next piece came out, I had a much better blurb although I still cringe looking at it:

DH Hanni enjoys historical fiction, fantasy, and anything with great characters and a compelling story. New to the world of writing but not reading The Child is the first published work by the author. DH Hanni currently lives in Eastern Washington (state).

Apparently I still hadn’t figured out why I capitalized Eastern and I know I’m missing a comma. I’m pretty sure I threw in the (state) to be cheeky. At least it’s better and was a more accurate reflection of my personality.

Currently I have several different versions of my bio saved. I have one that is around 50 words, another that is slightly longer, and one that is closer to 100 words.

Content So what exactly do you put into your author’s bio? After paying attention to the word limit, it’s up to you. A good rule of thumb is list any relevant information regarding writing. Do you have a degree in English or Creative Writing? A degree related to the subject of the piece or some other kind of specialized knowledge? Have you won any awards? Any other kind of prestigious or well-known accolade like a fellowship or grant?

Another bit of information to include is if you have previous publishing credits. If you don’t have any, that’s completely fine. Look at the first two bios I cobbled together. One came out before the other one even though it was accepted before the other. It’s why the second bio doesn’t reference the first publishing credit. It’s okay to be honest. If you don’t have any publishing credits, then consider emphasizing other things related to writing or personal interests.

As you get further along in your career and have more publishing credits, then the struggle with content changes. Amazingly I’ve been fortunate enough to have a mixture of online and print credits so I mention both. For online credits I reference the most recent and try to keep all of my print credits if the word limit allows me. If the word limit is really restrictive then I stick to most recent publications.

I think it’s a great idea to include some more personal items in your biography. If I have the space I like to list some hobbies and mention my spouse and furry children as they have to deal with living with a writer. Besides, we have lives outside of writing so why not mention them?

Finally, if you have a website, blog, Twitter, Facebook, any kind of online and social media presence, list them. It’s free promotion that will be seen by lots of eyes. Hopefully when a reader sees your biography they’ll be interested enough in your work to check you out. Maybe they’ll even follow your blog, Twitter, what have you, or friend you on Facebook.

For my last example, here’s what my current short bio looks like:

DH Hanni writes whatever pops into her mind. Her work has appeared online in Gravel Magazine, Indiana Voice Journal, and Lorelei Signal and in print in the LocoThology 2013: Tales of Fantasy and Science Fiction, First Contact Café, and Through Clouded Eyes anthologies. She enjoys reading, her three furry children and husband, history, cooking, and movies. DH Hanni can be found on Facebook or at dhhanni.net.

Granted, that blurb is 66 words so when I use it to accompany a story and the word limit is 50 words, I have to pare it down. Usually what I do is cut the personal stuff as I’d rather retain as many of my publishing credits and list my blog and Facebook.

 

When it comes to the author’s bio, make it as representative of you as possible. Keep in mind it will change over time and don’t be afraid to change it up for each place you submit work to. I tailor mine depending on the publication and my mood. Most importantly, be honest and be true to who you are.