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Weekly Musing: I Must, I Must Develop My Character!

Over the past couple of weeks, I’ve been working on developing the four main characters for my first novel. Since the novel is in the historical fiction genre, I’ve been working on research, a LOT of research, over the past 1.5 years. Even before I sit down to formally write even one sentence, I’ve begun reading up on novel structure, plot, setting, emotions, POV, and character development.

As I’ve been learning about character development, one tool in particular has come to my attention: character sheets. Characters sheets are a series of questions designed to help a person create a character, to get further inside the mind, body, heart, and soul of a character. When I was first researching character sheets, the top results that popped up were character sheets for role-playing games like Dungeons and Dragons. Eventually I was able to find some for just fiction writing. Characters, Emotions & Viewpoint by Nancy Kress has been a great help to me because it includes mini-bio sheets as well as advice on what questions to ask.

A lot of questions on character sheets are the basics such as age, birthplace, appearance, family background, etc. But the meat of the questions, what motivates the character in life, what kind of person does he see himself as, what’s her happiest memory, what’s his worst memory, etc. are to focus the writer to dig below the surface. To transform a character on a page to some living, breathing entity.

After collecting various character sheets from the internet and from books, I noticed a lot of the questions asked presume the character is a modern one. What kind of car does he drive? What high school did he go to? What’s his favorite movie or TV show? But what about those of us whose minds and characters like running around in the past? I have yet to discover character sheets geared at historical fiction so I just highlight relevant questions or adjust others for the time period I’m in.

But this has gotten me to think; why aren’t there character development sheets for different genres? A modern day character is different from an 8 armed robot designed to look like an octopus. Granted the ultimate goal of both these characters could be the same but it does feel silly asking an 8 armed robot designed to look like an octopus who did they take to their senior prom. Different genres have their own tropes; conventions if you will, so would it make a bit of sense for each genre to have their own character sheets?

For example, the needs of a romance writer are different from a western writer. A western writer is going to what to know what kind of horse(s) are my characters going to ride? What kind of gun(s) do my characters use? What time period? Location? Are there going to be Native Americans in the story, which tribe(s)? What building materials are available? But a romance writer, unless it’s a historical romance writer, isn’t going to be worried about this information so a guide more tailored to the romance genre convention would make sense.

I think having character development sheets by genre would really help writers’ lives easier. Having to comb through general questions to find relevant ones or rephrase others, adds to my workload. Time that could be spent getting to know the character and transforming them into a person.

But that’s just my view on it. Like everything else with writing, there is no correct approach. This has been an interesting experience for me since I don’t really do a whole lot of character development prior to writing a short story. Short stories by their nature, are supposed to be much simpler and deal with a single character’s journey. I let the character guide me more than actively spending hours a day, like I’m currently doing, thinking about them.

If anyone knows of any websites or books that contain character sheets more genre specific, feel free to wave your hand and let the class know!

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Weekly Musing: Don’t Pants Me!

Before I became a fiction writer, or an attempt at one, I never realized there were the terms outliner and pantser. The first term, outliner, makes sense to me. Someone who outlines before writing. I come from a background of writing research papers and essays so I have always used an outline. The other term, though, pantser, I didn’t even know what that could possibly be. It refers to a writer that flies by the seat of his pants when writing. In other words, doesn’t plan things out too heavily before throwing down words. And there are books and articles about the pros and cons of both and is a question that a lot of writers get about.

Needless to say reading there is a debate on which one is more beneficial for a writer was an eye opener. When I got more serious and interested in writing, I combed articles and websites about the writing process itself. For decades I had it in my mind that writers had to be some of the most organized people to produce stories that follow some kind of structure. I believed writers were one of the smartest groups of people on the planet not only to come up with the characters and stories but to add in symbolism, subtext, metaphors, similes, etc. It’s why I never seriously considered taking a stab at fiction writing before. Years of analysis in English classes instilled awe in me. I’m smart but there’s no way I’m that smart. Granted, we were reading good books, the classics, which by far don’t represent most fiction. Nothing could be further from these assessments. In fact, the more I read and learn, the more I realize the reality is the complete opposite.

At first I thought it would be better and easier for me to have a story mapped out before I ever put pen to paper. However I quickly realized this caused a great deal of doubt and anxiety in me. I have a very organized mind and in order to think, I need to be able to compartmentalize ideas. But outlining felt so forced and a less than organic way to produce a creative work. Outlining works great for me for papers and essays because of the inherent logical nature these types of works require. Creative works, perhaps not so much. A thought floats into your mind, better grab the closest piece of paper and a writing tool. Don’t be afraid to stop what you are doing if dialogue, a line, or an idea pops into your mind. Write it down before it flies away.

I also realized that if the biggest draw of fiction writing for me is to tap into a creative side that had long been suppressed, outlining and thinking too much about a piece before composing the rough draft is counterproductive. So for short stories, which are primarily what I’ve been writing, I pants it. I sometimes brainstorm ideas for a story before I start writing, mostly if I’m composing something that is supposed to follow a theme. For the most part, I usually just have a small idea of what the story is going to be and get to it.

A funny thing I’ve noticed, though, is I seem to be a bit of a hybrid of outliner and pantser. When I get to a good stopping point for the day, my brain has already thought several steps ahead. That’s where the world’s greatest invention comes in: The Post-it Note . (Not my actual handwriting. Those are way too legible to be mine.) I scribble what I see happening next because I won’t remember 5 minutes later. I slap the notes on the page. This isn’t the say I actually follow the notes. I do sometimes but as I begin a new day of writing, I try to be open to what the characters want to do. Yes, while to a certain degree I may be ‘God’ of a story, it really is the characters that drive and I’m just the schmuck that jots it down.

While I think pantsing is good for me, I can’t see myself giving up outlining ever. I’m just so organized and used to that nice sense of order. It’s my comfort zone and because I want to ultimately write novels, in particular historical fiction novels, an outline approach makes sense. Too many characters, places, and plots to just wing it. I need that focus of ideas and research at least for a rough draft. But I need to be open to the directions the characters take me so I can’t see myself holding steadfast to that outline.

What I’ve learned about the outlining vs. pantser debate is that it is all about what works best for you as a writer. Yet it is a great idea to try outlining if you are a pantser or pantsing it if you are a staunch outliner. I’ve also learned that for me, it just depends upon the project and my mood. There is no right or wrong way to approach creativity.

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My first soon-to-be-published piece!

I learned yesterday that a short story of mine, The Child, was accepted for inclusion in LocoThology: Tales of Fantasy and Science Fiction 2013 published by LocoNeal Publishing. The story is a Steampunk pirate story where the captain of The Aysel is charged with retrieving a child with special powers. It should be coming out this fall and I’ll post an update when I learn more!